Plan of Improvement for Antigone Essay

Plan of Improvement:
1.Thesis and supporting claims

• Does the thesis provide a clear claim?
• Do topic sentences make supporting claims about how the play communicates this belief/perspective?

2. Abundant evidence from throughout the play and supporting details

• Use blended sentences that smoothly incorporate evidence into a discussion of the context and significance of the passage

3. Effective two-part analysis

• Discuss meaning and relevance of the evidence in the context of the play
• Analyze and discuss the ideas developed about the broad issue raised by the thesis

4. Voice/Language

• Awkward sentences
• 1st/2nd person POV
• Vague wording

For each part of the plan...

A. Broadly explain what you need to focus on and why - BE CLEAR. Identify the issue and provide insight into what seems to be challenging

B. Provide a specific, quoted example

C. Explain how you plan to fix this area of focus. What will this look like when it's better?
D. Fix B